Wetness
The water is warm as it streams down both our bodies.
There is no greater witnessing of wetness than us.
Lathering in love, and suds, and beginnings.
I became lost in the drippings.
You, me, the faucet.
Baptized by your lips and your manhood.
Made new.
In the midst of our mist,
Drawn from our affections and hopes of glory,
We become perfectly, symmetrically,
Aqueous,
Bare and full of God’s promises to Her children.
What could heaven be if not us in perfect form?
But somehow the beautiful teeming love that we created,
has gone from spiritual to secular to sacrilegious.
Your promises of forever flowing
Have begun to resemble barren fields.
Then I realize it was all a wash.
All of it.
A stormy, soggy, sodden wash.
And I am left out to dry.
November 21, 2009 at 5:44 am
i think im wett
November 29, 2009 at 10:39 pm
i decided to give your words a visit and i found something nu (it’s been a minute sis). my favorite line: “Baptized by your lips and your manhood.” The ending was unexpected, but fitting. Keep writing. I’ll keep reading. Loved it!
April 17, 2010 at 10:04 pm
That was beautiful. Reminded me slightly of “Love Rain” by Jill Scott.
April 17, 2010 at 10:06 pm
Whew! Intense. I love your word play, and I can honestly say I’ve felt this about a past love. Love it Jo!